Meikal,

 

Here is the revised version of the document

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Asf9ecnyX4rkK3pyQMzDuH8YY5-eXw8quZ6guDiUmqY/edit?usp=sharing

 

Could you (and others too) review the highlighted section? I think it could be re-worded better (or remove altogether because it doesn’t make sense to me).

 

Thanks,
Dennis