Thanks, Hazem.

I have fixed those errors. I also added slide number. It makes it easier to navigate in the PDF version.

An updated version is enclosed.

Bill, you are the native speaker, I am not. Please comment any language that is too deviating from the norm.

Mats

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From: Hazem Hezzah <hhezzah.las@gmail.com>
Organisation: LAS
Date: Sunday, 26 September 2021 at 14:49
To: Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se>
Cc: ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org>
Subject: RE: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update

Hello Mats,

Now the part about “Appendix B” is duplicated at end of Slide 6 and start of Slide 7 .

Another minor note in Slide 7: “….for each language found in ~~the~~ chapter 9.”

Regards,

Hazem Hezzah

From: Latingp <latingp-bounces@icann.org> On Behalf Of Mats Dufberg via Latingp
Sent: 25 September, 2021 16:12
To: ICANN Latin GP <Latingp@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update

Slide 2 is updated with the end of comments date and a link to the proposal. Else no changes since last version.

(Thanks Bill.)