Thank you, Bill!
I have followed all your proposed updates (but MSR =
Maximum
Starting Repertoire).
In slide 10 I removed "In some cases LatinGP has requested characters to be included in MSR" because that is already covered in slide 5.
An updated version is enclosed.
Mats
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From: Bill Jouris <bill.jouris@insidethestack.com>
Reply to: Bill Jouris <bill.jouris@insidethestack.com>
Date: Sunday, 26 September 2021 at 20:18
To: ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org>, Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se>
Subject: Re: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update
Hi Mats,
Overall, I have to say that this is an awesome job. Thank you for taking it on.
A few
extremely minor tweaks:
- on Slide 5, it would probably be useful to spell out Maximal Standard Repertoire the first time that MSR is used.
- on Slide 5, the last bullet, I would change LatinGP to LatinGP's. That is, make it "possessive".
- Slide 6, the last bullet, add initial quotation mark before "The language..."
- Slide 7, first bullet: change "by the criteria" to "using those criteria"
- Slide 8, bullet 5: change "In many cases there is a precomposed codepoint" to "In many cases, Unicode has a precomposed codepoint"
- Slide 8, bullet 7: change to "The LatinGP's proposed repertoire lists 218 characters."
- Slide 9, last bullet: Use a capital A for Appendix
- Slide 10, bullet 2: Change "that" to "which"
As I say, an extremely impressive job. Thanks again.
Bill Jouris
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On Sunday, September 26, 2021, 10:49:41 AM PDT, Mats Dufberg via Latingp <latingp@icann.org> wrote:
Thanks, Hazem.
I have fixed those errors. I also added slide number. It makes it easier to navigate in the PDF version.
An updated version is enclosed.
Bill, you are the native speaker, I am not. Please comment any language that is too deviating from the norm.
Mats
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Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation)
Mobile: +46 73 065 3899
https://internetstiftelsen.se/
From:
Hazem Hezzah <hhezzah.las@gmail.com>
Organisation: LAS
Date: Sunday, 26 September 2021 at 14:49
To: Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se>
Cc: ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org>
Subject: RE: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update
Hello Mats,
Now the part about “Appendix B” is duplicated at end of Slide 6 and start of Slide 7 .
Another minor note in Slide 7: “….for each
language found in the chapter 9.”
Regards,
Hazem Hezzah
From: Latingp <latingp-bounces@icann.org>
On Behalf Of Mats Dufberg via Latingp
Sent: 25 September, 2021 16:12
To: ICANN Latin GP <Latingp@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update
Slide 2 is updated with the end of comments date and a link to the proposal. Else no changes since last version.
(Thanks Bill.)
Mats
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Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation)
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