Hello Mats,

Appreciate your effort.

After the 3 previous mails with comments, here my notes.

• Slide 6:  As Michael said, Languages with EGIDS level 4 and above were studied (and of course some of Level 5)x, and agree with Bill to be prepared to give a short description of what EGIDS means.
  Last line “...EGIDS level...”
• Slide 7:  “....documented in the report, but they can be found ....”
• Slide 12:  “ß” could be added after “Sharp S”, and as Michael mentioned its “ss”
• Slide 13:   “The appendix contains candidate variant...”, and “The appendix is for reference for anybody doing...”

Reagrds,

Hazem Hezzah

From: Michael Bauland via Latingp
Sent: 21 September 2021 08:37
To: Mats Dufberg
Cc: latingp@icann.org
Subject: Re: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update

Hi Mats,

thank you very much for your work. Apart from the items already

mentioned by Dennis and Bill, I found the following worth mentioning:

* page 3: typo in "Appendicies" => "Appendices"

* page 4: trailing comma at last bullet point

* page 4: agree with Dennis, maybe change "binding" to "authoritative"?

* page 6: it's not just level 4, but also the ones above (below?), maybe

          change this to: "... those on levels 1 - 4 on the ..."

* page 7: "..., they but can be found ..." sounds strange to me; unless

          the native speakers object, I'd change it to

          "..., but they can be found ..."

* page 10: Agree with Dennis, please rephrase as we already did include

           characters not in MSR, thereby creating a new version of MSR.

* page 12: Instead of 'Sharp S and "s"' I guess it should be

           'Sharp S and "ss"'

* page 13: "The appendix contain" -> "The appendix contains" (+ s).

* page 13: I would remove the second "considered to be", because it's

           already stated before that they are "considered to have". So,

           just write 'they are considered to have enough similarity to

           be "visually confusable".'

Cheers,

Michael

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