Hi Dennis,Thanks for sharing the file. I’ll think about a different wording but anyone is welcome to suggest something.
Best,
MeikalAm 4. Okt. 2019, 18:53 +0200 schrieb Tan Tanaka, Dennis <dtantanaka@verisign.com>:
Meikal,
Here is the revised version of the document
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Asf9ecnyX4rkK3pyQMzDuH8YY5-eXw8quZ6guDiUmqY/edit?usp=sharing
Could you (and others too) review the highlighted section? I think it could be re-worded better (or remove altogether because it doesn’t make sense to me).
Thanks,
Dennis