Hi Mats, 

Overall, I have to say that this is an awesome job.  Thank you for taking it on. 

A few extremely minor tweaks: 
- on Slide 5, it would probably be useful to spell out Maximal Standard Repertoire the first time that MSR is used. 
- on Slide 5, the last bullet, I would change LatinGP to LatinGP's.  That is, make it "possessive". 
- Slide 6, the last bullet, add initial quotation mark before "The language..." 
- Slide 7, first bullet: change "by the criteria" to "using those criteria" 
- Slide 8, bullet 5: change "In many cases there is a precomposed codepoint" to "In many cases, Unicode has a precomposed codepoint" 
- Slide 8, bullet 7: change to "The LatinGP's proposed repertoire lists 218 characters."  
- Slide 9, last bullet: Use a capital A for Appendix 
- Slide 10, bullet 2: Change "that" to "which" 

As I say, an extremely impressive job.  Thanks again.

Bill Jouris
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On Sunday, September 26, 2021, 10:49:41 AM PDT, Mats Dufberg via Latingp <latingp@icann.org> wrote:


Thanks, Hazem.

 

I have fixed those errors. I also added slide number. It makes it easier to navigate in the PDF version.

An updated version is enclosed.

 

Bill, you are the native speaker, I am not. Please comment any language that is too deviating from the norm.

 

 

Mats

 

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From: Hazem Hezzah <hhezzah.las@gmail.com>
Organisation: LAS
Date: Sunday, 26 September 2021 at 14:49
To: Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se>
Cc: ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org>
Subject: RE: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update

 

Hello Mats,

 

Now the part about “Appendix B” is duplicated at end of Slide 6 and start of Slide 7 .

Another minor note in Slide 7:  “….for each language found in the chapter 9.”

 

 

Regards, 

Hazem Hezzah

 

From: Latingp <latingp-bounces@icann.org> On Behalf Of Mats Dufberg via Latingp
Sent: 25 September, 2021 16:12
To: ICANN Latin GP <Latingp@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update

 

Slide 2 is updated with the end of comments date and a link to the proposal. Else no changes since last version.

 

(Thanks Bill.)

 

 

Mats

 

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Mats Dufberg

mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se

Technical Expert

Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation)

Mobile: +46 73 065 3899

https://internetstiftelsen.se/

 

 

 

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