Caleb and. Raoul

Sorry to have missed the first request.  I have gone through and suggested edits and made comments.  In a few cases I have suggested improvements in the English.  The major issue I found was there was not a clear distinction between individiuals whor belong to/are affiliated with/are members of a Member organization and Member Organizations.  “Member” used for both the NPOC member organizations and individuals who are not themselves members of NPOC.

Please note that I am always happy to assist in editing governing documents for ICANN and ISOC.  It has been one of my jobs in life as a lawyer for non-profits.  But I also am perfectly happy to not. have my edits or suggestions accepted.

I am available for further consultation, if desired.

John More


On Apr 26, 2022, at 2:00 PM, Caleb Olumuyiwa Ogundele via Npoc-discuss <npoc-discuss@icann.org> wrote:

Greetings Members, 

This is another warm reminder to contribute to commenting on the proposed reviewed charter which is due to close in 6 days from now. 

We look forward to constructive engagement on the document. 

Thank you 


Caleb Ogundele

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Pelase exsuce typos adn errosr.

On Fri, Apr 22, 2022, 1:44 PM Caleb Olumuyiwa Ogundele <muyiwacaleb@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear Members,

This charter has come a long way with lots of volunteer work put into it. 

We encourage our members to kindly make comments towards the final review of this body of work.

We totally understand volunteer work is difficult during this relative post-covid era. However, we need you as you all hold an important role in the entire multistakeholder process.

Hence, the call for comments. Please bear in mind that we have less than 10 days to make our comments from the time of this posting.

Periodically, I shall be sending reminders to us to kindly make our inputs.


Warm regards

Caleb Ogundele



On Fri, Apr 22, 2022 at 1:34 PM Remmy Nweke via Npoc-discuss <npoc-discuss@icann.org> wrote:
Thanks Raoul
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On Thu, Apr 21, 2022 at 10:15 PM Raoul Plommer via Npoc-discuss <npoc-discuss@icann.org> wrote:
Dear NPOC members,

The charter is now ready for your final review:


If you have any concerns, please comment in the document in the next two weeks and we can discuss them well ahead of the next NPOC EC meeting, which is taking place on the ninth of May. The deadline for comments is on the 2nd of May.

After we've reviewed the charter we'll hopefully be able to return this work for its final destination in the Board Organizational Effectiveness Committee. Let's get this done!

-Raoul
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