- OFB-WG - lists.icann.org

Fwd: [Community-Finance] Recordings Available: Draft ICANN FY25 Operating Plan and Budget Community Webinar
by Marita Moll Dec. 14, 2023

Dec. 14, 2023

FYI -- full set of links to operating plan and budget webinars Marita -------- Forwarded Message -------- Subject: [Community-Finance] Recordings Available: Draft ICANN FY25 Operating Plan and Budget Community Webinar Date: Thu, 14 Dec 2023 18:52:33 +0000 From: Planning via Community-Finance <community-finance(a)icann.org> Reply-To: Planning <planning(a)icann.org> To: community-finance(a)icann.org <community-finance(a)icann.org> CC: Planning <planning(a)icann.org> Hello Community-Finance members, Thank you for your participation in our FY25 Draft Operating Plan and Budget webinar this week. If you were not able to attend either of the webinars but would like to be informed, you can view the recordings here: Session 2: Dec 13 17:00 UTC Session Recording <https://icann.zoom.us/rec/share/-KhC2kazMaSdS47ZAEsROggAoXiM_33BjUE4sdXJPeP…> Session 1: Dec 13 1:00 UTC Session Recording <https://icann.zoom.us/rec/share/ppV4uA60j4-tCjqr7RmxP3z4Z1qbBs86IBwJT7tXos9…> We also provided additional content, such as deck of our presentation, on our Finance and Planning Community Wiki: https://community.icann.org/display/projfinadhocws/FY25+Operating+Plan+and+… <https://community.icann.org/display/projfinadhocws/FY25+Operating+Plan+and+…> As a reminder, the Public Comment proceedings for both the ICANN/IANA and PTI Draft Operating Plans and Budget opened on 12 December and will run through 12 February 2024. We are also taking clarifying questions on any details in the draft plan _until 16 January 2024_. Clarifying questions are intended to aid the community in submitting public comments to our proposals. We encourage all to participate in this important process and we look forward to hearing your feedback. ICANN/IANA Public Comment Proceeding <https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/draft-icann-fy25-plans-1…> PTI Public Comment Proceeding <https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/draft-pti-fy25-operating…> Thank you, ICANN Finance & Planning team

1 0

Meeting invitation: At-Large Operations, Finance and Budget Working Group (OFB-WG) Call on Thursday, 14 December 2023 at 18:00 UTC
by ICANN At-Large Staff Dec. 14, 2023

Dec. 14, 2023

***If you require a dial out or need to state an apology, please contact At-Large staff at staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> with your preferred number*** Dear All, The next At-Large Operations, Finance and Budget Working Group (OFB-WG) Call is scheduled for Thursday, 14 December 2023 at 18:00 UTC for 60 mins. For other times: https://tinyurl.com/av67s6kf The agenda and call details can be found at: https://community.icann.org/x/EYEYEQ<https://community.icann.org/x/XgCjDQ> Zoom Room: https://icann.zoom.us/j/98036218802?pwd=a0VnNDJieHNQK0JlZlNkdWEvWDBxUT09 / Password: OFBWG#1234 Wiki Workspace: https://community.icann.org/x/koTsBw ADIGO Conference Bridge: (Please note - change in connection details: for all languages, dial into the Adigo line, press 1638 and the Adigo operator will ask you which language channel you prefer and transfer you to the appropriate language channel). EN, ES & FR : 1638 Toll-free access number (US and Canada): 800 550 6865 Other toll-free numbers: https://www.adigo.com/icann [adigo.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.adigo.com_icann&d=…> If you require a dial-out please contact At-Large staff at: staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> Thank you. Kind Regards, At-Large Staff ICANN Policy Staff in support of the At-Large Community Website: atlarge.icann.org<https://atlarge.icann.org/> Facebook: facebook.com/icann<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge>atlarge<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge> Twitter: @<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge>ICANNAtLarge<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge>

1 2

ATTENTION: Call for membership: Operations, Finance and Budget Working group (OFB-WG) - Open till Dec 13
by ICANN At-Large Staff Dec. 12, 2023

Dec. 12, 2023

Dear All, On behalf of Claire Craig and Ricardo Holmquist, co- Chairs of the At-Large Operations, Finance, and Budget Working Group (OFB-WG)<https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=132940946>, this is a call for new members and for current members to re-confirm their interest in remaining. As noted by Jonathan Zuck, ALAC Chair, all members of the ALAC are required to join the OFB-WG and attend the meetings on a regular basis. Note the objectives of the OFB-WG in its charter. <https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=132940946> The tasks of the OFB-WG include: o Providing input to, and drafting any statement related to, the ICANN strategic plan and processes. o Providing input to, and drafting any statement related to, ICANN's operational initiatives. o Providing input to, and drafting any statement related to, the ICANN and IANA/PTI budget process. o Providing input to, and drafting any statement related to, Organizational Reviews and Continuous Improvement. o Reviewing any Fiscal Year At-Large Funding Requests for inclusion into the ALAC’s statement on ICANN’s annual budget and operating plan. Could you please let the co-chairs and At-Large staff <mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> know whether you are interested in joining the working group or, if you are an existing member, whether you do wish to continue your membership by Wednesday, 13 December 2023 , 23:00 UTC. Kind regards, At-Large Staff ICANN Policy Staff in support of the At-Large Community Website: atlarge.icann.org<http://atlarge.icann.org/> Facebook: facebook.com/icannatlarge<http://facebook.com/icannatlarge> Twitter: @ICANNAtLarge<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge> [signature_1474846518]

2 1

Meeting invitation: At-Large Operations, Finance and Budget Working Group (OFB-WG) Call on Thursday, 07 December 2023 at 18:00 UTC
by ICANN At-Large Staff Dec. 7, 2023

Dec. 7, 2023

***If you require a dial out or need to state an apology, please contact At-Large staff at staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> with your preferred number*** Dear All, The next At-Large Operations, Finance and Budget Working Group (OFB-WG) Call is scheduled for Thursday, 07 December 2023 at 18:00 UTC for 60 mins. For other times: https://tinyurl.com/3kdbhhbe The agenda and call details can be found at: https://community.icann.org/x/KgH8E<https://community.icann.org/x/XgCjDQ> Zoom Room:https://icann.zoom.us/j/93532320548?pwd=cDRGb3N6cFpLRzJPZFFGRHpXdVdDdz09 / Password: OFBWG#1234 Wiki Workspace: https://community.icann.org/x/koTsBw ADIGO Conference Bridge: (Please note - change in connection details: for all languages, dial into the Adigo line, press 1638 and the Adigo operator will ask you which language channel you prefer and transfer you to the appropriate language channel). EN, ES & FR : 1638 Toll-free access number (US and Canada): 800 550 6865 Other toll-free numbers: https://www.adigo.com/icann [adigo.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.adigo.com_icann&d=…> If you require a dial-out please contact At-Large staff at: staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> Thank you. Kind Regards, At-Large Staff ICANN Policy Staff in support of the At-Large Community Website: atlarge.icann.org<https://atlarge.icann.org/> Facebook: facebook.com/icann<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge>atlarge<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge> Twitter: @<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge>ICANNAtLarge<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge>

3 5

Meeting invitation: At-Large Operations, Finance and Budget Working Group (OFB-WG) Call on Thursday, 30 November 2023 at 18:00 UTC
by ICANN At-Large Staff Nov. 30, 2023

Nov. 30, 2023

***If you require a dial out or need to state an apology, please contact At-Large staff at staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> with your preferred number*** Dear All, The next At-Large Operations, Finance and Budget Working Group (OFB-WG) Call is scheduled for Thursday, 30 November 2023 at 18:00 UTC for 60 mins. For other times: https://tinyurl.com/2ccncepw The agenda and call details can be found at: https://community.icann.org/x/QwK1E<https://community.icann.org/x/XgCjDQ> Zoom Room: https://icann.zoom.us/j/97074055949?pwd=WG9vOWMrUFNNazFQNEY0OGdQb0ZJUT09/ Password: OFBWG#1234 Wiki Workspace: https://community.icann.org/x/koTsBw ADIGO Conference Bridge: (Please note - change in connection details: for all languages, dial into the Adigo line, press 1638 and the Adigo operator will ask you which language channel you prefer and transfer you to the appropriate language channel). EN, ES & FR : 1638 Toll-free access number (US and Canada): 800 550 6865 Other toll-free numbers: https://www.adigo.com/icann [adigo.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.adigo.com_icann&d=…> If you require a dial-out please contact At-Large staff at: staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> Thank you. Kind Regards, At-Large Staff ICANN Policy Staff in support of the At-Large Community Website: atlarge.icann.org<https://atlarge.icann.org/> Facebook: facebook.com/icann<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge>atlarge<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge> Twitter: @<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge>ICANNAtLarge<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge>

1 2

IMPORTANT - [Community-Finance] Invitation: Attend ICANN's Draft FY25 Operating Plan & Budget Webinar
by ICANN At-Large Staff Nov. 28, 2023

Nov. 28, 2023

Dear All, Please see below a note from the ICANN Finance and Planning regarding an upcoming webinar on ICANN's Draft FY25 Operating Plan & Budget. Please be sure to register for one of the two sessions. Kind regards, At-Large Staff ICANN Policy Staff in support of the At-Large Community Website: atlarge.icann.org<https://atlarge.icann.org/> Facebook: facebook.com/icann<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge>atlarge<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge> Twitter: @<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge>ICANNAtLarge<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge> [signature_457511073] From: Community-Finance <community-finance-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Planning via Community-Finance <community-finance(a)icann.org> Reply-To: Planning <planning(a)icann.org> Date: Tuesday, November 28, 2023 at 9:27 AM To: "community-finance(a)icann.org" <community-finance(a)icann.org> Cc: Planning <planning(a)icann.org> Subject: [Community-Finance] Invitation: Attend ICANN's Draft FY25 Operating Plan & Budget Webinar Dear Community Finance members, The Finance and Planning team would like to invite you to attend one of our informational webinars on 13 December 2023. We will present highlights of the Draft ICANN Fiscal Year (FY) 25–29 Operating and Financial Plan and the Draft ICANN FY25 Operating Plan and Budget. Both webinars will be 1 hour and 30 minutes long and will present identical information. * 13 December 2023 at 01:00 UTC, please register here [icann.zoom.us]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/icann.zoom.us/meeting/register/tJMvde-ur…>. * 13 December 2023 at 17:00 UTC, please register here [icann.zoom.us]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/icann.zoom.us/meeting/register/tJwvc-2sr…>. The Draft ICANN FY25–29 Operating and Financial Plan details the feasibility and timing of activities and milestones identified to achieve the objectives and goals set forth in the Strategic Plan. This five-year plan is intended to serve as a comprehensive view of the activities the ICANN organization (org) performs or will support to satisfy ICANN's FY21–25 Strategic Plan<https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/strategic-plan-2021-2025-24jun1…>. The Draft FY25 Operating Plan and Budget defines and describes ICANN's planned activities in detail for FY25, and the anticipated funding sources and levels. During the webinar, ICANN org will present information to help attendees gain a better understanding of ICANN's draft plans referenced above. The webinar also offers an opportunity for attendees to ask questions. ICANN will then provide answers and information designed to assist in Public Comment participation. Public comments for the Draft ICANN FY25-29 Operating and Financial Plan, the Draft ICANN FY25 Operating Plan and Budget, the Draft IANA FY25 Operating Plan and Budget, and the Draft PTI FY25 Operating Plan and Budget is anticipated to open for submissions on 12 December 2023. Please feel free to extend this invitation to others in the community. We look forward to your attendance. Best Regards, The ICANN Finance & Planning Team

1 0

REMINDER / Meeting invitation: At-Large Operations, Finance and Budget Working Group (OFB-WG) Call on Thursday, 30 November 2023 at 18:00 UTC
by ICANN At-Large Staff Nov. 28, 2023

Nov. 28, 2023

***If you require a dial out or need to state an apology, please contact At-Large staff at staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> with your preferred number*** Dear All, The next At-Large Operations, Finance and Budget Working Group (OFB-WG) Call is scheduled for Thursday, 30 November 2023 at 18:00 UTC for 60 mins. For other times: https://tinyurl.com/2ccncepw The agenda and call details can be found at: https://community.icann.org/x/QwK1E Zoom Room: https://icann.zoom.us/j/97074055949?pwd=WG9vOWMrUFNNazFQNEY0OGdQb0ZJUT09/ Password: OFBWG#1234 Wiki Workspace: https://community.icann.org/x/koTsBw ADIGO Conference Bridge: (Please note - change in connection details: for all languages, dial into the Adigo line, press 1638 and the Adigo operator will ask you which language channel you prefer and transfer you to the appropriate language channel). EN, ES & FR : 1638 Toll-free access number (US and Canada): 800 550 6865 Other toll-free numbers: https://www.adigo.com/icann [adigo.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.adigo.com_icann&d=…> If you require a dial-out please contact At-Large staff at: staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> Thank you. Kind Regards, At-Large Staff ICANN Policy Staff in support of the At-Large Community Website: atlarge.icann.org<https://atlarge.icann.org/> Facebook: facebook.com/icann<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge>atlarge<https://www.facebook.com/icannatlarge> Twitter: @<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge>ICANNAtLarge<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge> [signature_43317779]

1 0

Re: [OFB-WG] [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR- APPROVAL and closing document
by Silvia Vivanco Nov. 17, 2023

Nov. 17, 2023

Dear Bill and all, Thank you all for your contributions to the Statement, the document will be closed for edits and staff will include the Appendix with Sebastian presentation. Kindest regards, Silvia From: Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr(a)gmail.com> Date: Thursday, November 16, 2023 at 11:43 PM To: Bill Jouris <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com> Cc: Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org>, OFB-WG <ofb-wg(a)icann.org>, Jonathan Zuck <jzuck(a)innovatorsnetwork.org>, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris(a)gmail.com>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang(a)gmail.com>, Claire Craig <claireccraig(a)gmail.com>, Vanda Scartezini <vanda(a)scartezini.org>, "sebastien(a)bachollet.com" <sebastien(a)bachollet.com>, At-Large Staff <staff(a)atlarge.icann.org> Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR- APPROVAL and closing document Excellent 👌👍👌 short ans sweet will be just fine for this Zin my view... Thank You Bill et.al [et.al]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__http:/et.al__;!!PtGJab4!5sD24Te5kDizuhlzl7-ZdOV…>. On Fri, 17 Nov 2023, 12:28 Bill Jouris, <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com<mailto:b_jouris@yahoo.com>> wrote: Hi Silvia, It looks pretty good to me. My only note would be that the Appendix cites Sebastian's presentation, but appears not to have a link to it. Please express my thanks to whoever added the initial boilerplate. Bill Jouris Sent from Yahoo Mail on Android [mail.onelink.me]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/mail.onelink.me/107872968?pid=nativeplac…> On Thu, Nov 16, 2023 at 4:28 PM, Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org<mailto:silvia.vivanco@icann.org>> wrote: Dear all, Thank you for your edits to the document, with your approval, staff will close the document for edits and will prepare the final submission, including the PPT. The vote will be launched tomorrow Friday 17 November. Kind regards, Silvia From: Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org<mailto:silvia.vivanco@icann.org>> Date: Thursday, November 16, 2023 at 10:26 AM To: Bill Jouris <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com<mailto:b_jouris@yahoo.com>>, OFB-WG <ofb-wg(a)icann.org<mailto:ofb-wg@icann.org>> Cc: Jonathan Zuck <jzuck(a)innovatorsnetwork.org<mailto:jzuck@innovatorsnetwork.org>>, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris(a)gmail.com<mailto:rihogris@gmail.com>>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr(a)gmail.com<mailto:langdonorr@gmail.com>>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang(a)gmail.com<mailto:dndannang@gmail.com>>, Claire Craig <claireccraig(a)gmail.com<mailto:claireccraig@gmail.com>>, Vanda Scartezini <vanda(a)scartezini.org<mailto:vanda@scartezini.org>>, "sebastien(a)bachollet.com<mailto:sebastien@bachollet.com>" <sebastien(a)bachollet.com<mailto:sebastien@bachollet.com>>, At-Large Staff <staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR Dear bill, Yes, it is easier to send 2 documents and reference the PPT as an Annex. Thank you very much for your feedback! Silvia From: Bill Jouris <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com<mailto:b_jouris@yahoo.com>> Reply-To: Bill Jouris <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com<mailto:b_jouris@yahoo.com>> Date: Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 8:15 PM To: Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org<mailto:silvia.vivanco@icann.org>>, OFB-WG <ofb-wg(a)icann.org<mailto:ofb-wg@icann.org>> Cc: Jonathan Zuck <jzuck(a)innovatorsnetwork.org<mailto:jzuck@innovatorsnetwork.org>>, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris(a)gmail.com<mailto:rihogris@gmail.com>>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr(a)gmail.com<mailto:langdonorr@gmail.com>>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang(a)gmail.com<mailto:dndannang@gmail.com>>, Claire Craig <claireccraig(a)gmail.com<mailto:claireccraig@gmail.com>>, Vanda Scartezini <vanda(a)scartezini.org<mailto:vanda@scartezini.org>>, "sebastien(a)bachollet.com<mailto:sebastien@bachollet.com>" <sebastien(a)bachollet.com<mailto:sebastien@bachollet.com>>, At-Large Staff <staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR Hi Silvia, My inclination is to make it an annex. But I'm open to arguments, if someone here has a different view on the subject. Bill Sent from Yahoo Mail on Android [go.onelink.me]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/go.onelink.me/107872968?pid=InProduct&c=…> On Wed, Nov 15, 2023 at 4:07 PM, Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org<mailto:silvia.vivanco@icann.org>> wrote: Dear Bill, Do you wish to include the Power point in the same body of the ALAC statement? Or could the PPT sent as an annex to the statement? Thank you very much! Silvia From: Bill Jouris <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com<mailto:b_jouris@yahoo.com>> Date: Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 7:05 PM To: OFB-WG <ofb-wg(a)icann.org<mailto:ofb-wg@icann.org>>, Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org<mailto:silvia.vivanco@icann.org>> Cc: Jonathan Zuck <jzuck(a)innovatorsnetwork.org<mailto:jzuck@innovatorsnetwork.org>>, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris(a)gmail.com<mailto:rihogris@gmail.com>>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr(a)gmail.com<mailto:langdonorr@gmail.com>>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang(a)gmail.com<mailto:dndannang@gmail.com>>, Claire Craig <claireccraig(a)gmail.com<mailto:claireccraig@gmail.com>>, Vanda Scartezini <vanda(a)scartezini.org<mailto:vanda@scartezini.org>>, "sebastien(a)bachollet.com<mailto:sebastien@bachollet.com>" <sebastien(a)bachollet.com<mailto:sebastien@bachollet.com>>, At-Large Staff <staff(a)atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org>> Subject: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR As noted in the document, we are looking to attach a PowerPoint. Once I figure out how to do that. For your reference, it is attached here. Bill Jouris On Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 02:07:17 PM PST, Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org<mailto:silvia.vivanco@icann.org>> wrote: Dear OFB-WG members, On behalf of Bill Jouris, penholder for the statement, along with Cheryl Langdon-Orr, Vanda Scartezini, Daniel Nanghaka, and Sebastian Bachollet, please find the link to the final draft of the ALAC Statement on the Pilot Holistic Review Revised Draft Terms of Reference at:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNGOv6wyAi9shj8hLwisJ2fcelGduDDYIj3E… [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1GNGOv6wyAi9s…>. There will be a 24-hour comment period closing tomorrow, Thursday, 16 November, at 23:59 UTC. Please add your comments directly to the Google document. Kind regards, Silvia Silvia Vivanco Senior Manager, At-Large Regional Affairs Website: atlarge.icann.org [atlarge.icann.org]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__http:/atlarge.icann.org/__;!!PtGJab4!4I0Emc1v1t…> Facebook: facebook.com/icannatlarge [facebook.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__http:/facebook.com/icannatlarge__;!!PtGJab4!4I0…> Twitter: @ICANNAtLarge<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge__;!!PtGJab4!4I0…> [twitter.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge__;!!PtGJab4!4I0…> [signature_1513552666]

1 0

Re: [OFB-WG] [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR- APPROVAL and closing document
by Silvia Vivanco Nov. 17, 2023

Nov. 17, 2023

Dear all, Thank you for your edits to the document, with your approval, staff will close the document for edits and will prepare the final submission, including the PPT. The vote will be launched tomorrow Friday 17 November. Kind regards, Silvia From: Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org> Date: Thursday, November 16, 2023 at 10:26 AM To: Bill Jouris <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com>, OFB-WG <ofb-wg(a)icann.org> Cc: Jonathan Zuck <jzuck(a)innovatorsnetwork.org>, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris(a)gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr(a)gmail.com>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang(a)gmail.com>, Claire Craig <claireccraig(a)gmail.com>, Vanda Scartezini <vanda(a)scartezini.org>, "sebastien(a)bachollet.com" <sebastien(a)bachollet.com>, At-Large Staff <staff(a)atlarge.icann.org> Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR Dear bill, Yes, it is easier to send 2 documents and reference the PPT as an Annex. Thank you very much for your feedback! Silvia From: Bill Jouris <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com> Reply-To: Bill Jouris <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com> Date: Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 8:15 PM To: Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org>, OFB-WG <ofb-wg(a)icann.org> Cc: Jonathan Zuck <jzuck(a)innovatorsnetwork.org>, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris(a)gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr(a)gmail.com>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang(a)gmail.com>, Claire Craig <claireccraig(a)gmail.com>, Vanda Scartezini <vanda(a)scartezini.org>, "sebastien(a)bachollet.com" <sebastien(a)bachollet.com>, At-Large Staff <staff(a)atlarge.icann.org> Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR Hi Silvia, My inclination is to make it an annex. But I'm open to arguments, if someone here has a different view on the subject. Bill Sent from Yahoo Mail on Android [go.onelink.me]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/go.onelink.me/107872968?pid=InProduct&c=…> On Wed, Nov 15, 2023 at 4:07 PM, Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org> wrote: Dear Bill, Do you wish to include the Power point in the same body of the ALAC statement? Or could the PPT sent as an annex to the statement? Thank you very much! Silvia From: Bill Jouris <b_jouris(a)yahoo.com> Date: Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 7:05 PM To: OFB-WG <ofb-wg(a)icann.org>, Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org> Cc: Jonathan Zuck <jzuck(a)innovatorsnetwork.org>, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris(a)gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr(a)gmail.com>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang(a)gmail.com>, Claire Craig <claireccraig(a)gmail.com>, Vanda Scartezini <vanda(a)scartezini.org>, "sebastien(a)bachollet.com" <sebastien(a)bachollet.com>, At-Large Staff <staff(a)atlarge.icann.org> Subject: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR As noted in the document, we are looking to attach a PowerPoint. Once I figure out how to do that. For your reference, it is attached here. Bill Jouris On Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 02:07:17 PM PST, Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco(a)icann.org> wrote: Dear OFB-WG members, On behalf of Bill Jouris, penholder for the statement, along with Cheryl Langdon-Orr, Vanda Scartezini, Daniel Nanghaka, and Sebastian Bachollet, please find the link to the final draft of the ALAC Statement on the Pilot Holistic Review Revised Draft Terms of Reference at:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNGOv6wyAi9shj8hLwisJ2fcelGduDDYIj3E… [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1GNGOv6wyAi9s…>. There will be a 24-hour comment period closing tomorrow, Thursday, 16 November, at 23:59 UTC. Please add your comments directly to the Google document. Kind regards, Silvia Silvia Vivanco Senior Manager, At-Large Regional Affairs Website: atlarge.icann.org [atlarge.icann.org]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__http:/atlarge.icann.org/__;!!PtGJab4!4I0Emc1v1t…> Facebook: facebook.com/icannatlarge [facebook.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__http:/facebook.com/icannatlarge__;!!PtGJab4!4I0…> Twitter: @ICANNAtLarge<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge__;!!PtGJab4!4I0…> [twitter.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge__;!!PtGJab4!4I0…> [signature_1513552666]

2 1

ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR
by Silvia Vivanco Nov. 16, 2023

Nov. 16, 2023

Dear OFB-WG members, On behalf of Bill Jouris, penholder for the statement, along with Cheryl Langdon-Orr, Vanda Scartezini, Daniel Nanghaka, and Sebastian Bachollet, please find the link to the final draft of the ALAC Statement on the Pilot Holistic Review Revised Draft Terms of Reference at:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNGOv6wyAi9shj8hLwisJ2fcelGduDDYIj3E…. There will be a 24-hour comment period closing tomorrow, Thursday, 16 November, at 23:59 UTC. Please add your comments directly to the Google document. Kind regards, Silvia Silvia Vivanco Senior Manager, At-Large Regional Affairs Website: atlarge.icann.org<http://atlarge.icann.org/> Facebook: facebook.com/icannatlarge<http://facebook.com/icannatlarge> Twitter: @ICANNAtLarge<https://twitter.com/ICANNAtLarge> [signature_1513552666]

4 6