I've reviewed the slides and in addition the input that Jean-Baptiste
listed below, I have the following recommendations:
Slide 7: Promotes consumer trust - delete "in gTLD domain
names". That is not in the Bylaws.
Slide 17: Spell out BWG since this is the first occurrence.
Slide 17: Sub-bullets 2 and 3 of the 2nd major bullet (It is
interpreted... and While these ...) seem to be sub-bullets of the first
(From the mandate...)
Slide 21: Draft Recommendation really does not makes sense in light of
the Temp Specification and planned Expedited PDP. I suggest we delete it
from the slides and discuss it at a future meeting.
Slide 29: Define ARS here (and can delete definition slide 36).
Slide 36: 4th bullet defining WDRP is really just a statement of
known fact (and known to the last WHOIS RT). I suggest we delete it
here.
Slide 37: Rec# 6 Rationale - Do we mean the ARS IMPLEMENTATION is
on-going as opposed to the ARS on-going?
At 25/06/2018 11:36 AM, Jean-Baptiste Deroulez wrote:
Dear review team members,
In preparation for your engagement session this Thursday 28 June at
17:00-18:30 (EST), please find attached the latest draft version of
the slide deck.
Please note that slides 18 (WHOIS1 Rec #1 – Strategic Priority),
21 (WHOIS1 Rec # 2 – Siingle WHOIS Policy), and 60 (Objective
3: Law Enforcement Needs) are still awaiting input or confirmation
from rapporteurs. Thank you for looking into these.
Kind regards,
Jean-Baptiste