As you can see below, I sent in revised text minutes before presenting Anything New today.  I understand that a decision was reached this morning to move the item to the single whois policy focus, and just have a pointer to that from the Anything new section.  I understand that Cathrin has a takeaway to work on the language, and I volunteer to help with the remaining pointer/placeholder on the GDPR in anything new.

cheers Stephanie



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Subject: Re: Subgroup 2 Anything New report
Date: Thu, 26 Jul 2018 16:58:20 +0200
From: Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca>
To: Lisa Phifer <lisa@corecom.com>
CC: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>


Not completed yet, but part is there....

SP

On 2018-07-21 09:07, Lisa Phifer wrote:
Hi Stephanie,

I wanted to draw your attention to the gap assessment on your subgroup report:
https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/71604731/Subgroup2-AnythingNew-Report-Draft2.docx

- Draft to be updated to include material presented on ICANN62 slides (attached)
- Subsection 1: Contains methodology which should be moved to Subsection 2.
- Subsection 3: Table needs to be updated to reflect ICANN62 slide.
   Center column and ?main findings? list should be fleshed out to
   tie back to key questions currently listed in Subsection 1.
- Subsection 4: Template text/action item to be replaced with ICANN62 slide text
- Subsection 5: Template text to be replaced with Subgroup?s overall conclusion

Please provide any report updates to address these gaps no later than
Sunday 22 July 23:59 UTC

Thank you
Lisa