It looks fine, no
further comments.
Dear
all,
Some
small edits proposed in the text below (in bold and red) to
clarify 1) the "this" in the second sentence and 2) that
this engagement session is one opportunity to provide
feedback (i.e., there will be more) just to avoid
misunderstanding.
All best
Cathrin
From: RDS-WHOIS2-RT [mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces@icann.org]
On Behalf Of Jean-Baptiste Deroulez
Sent: Monday, May 28, 2018 10:15 PM
To: RDS WHOIS2-RT List
Subject: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED: ICANN62
Engagement Session Description
Dear Review Team
members,
Following the action
item identified today on plenary call
#28, please review the below
updated ICANN62 engagement session description and confirm
by
tomorrow, Tuesday 29 May 2018 23:59 UTC
whether you have any edits/comments.
Join a discussion
with the Registration Directory Service Review team
(RDS-WHOIS2).
The Registration
Directory Service Review, formerly known as "WHOIS"
(RDS-WHOIS2) is mandated by the ICANN Bylaws., thisThe
scope of its work includes assessing
how the recommendations of the first WHOIS Review were
carried out, as well as assessing the effectiveness of the
gTLD registry directory service and whether its
implementation meets the legitimate needs of law
enforcement, promoting consumer trust and safeguarding
registrant data. The RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team will update
the community on its findings to date and seek input on
its findings as well as address any questions pertaining
to its scope and work plan. This is
your
one opportunity
for you
to
provide input into the RDS-WHOIS2 work.
For more
information, please visit the RDS-WHOIS2 wiki
https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/.
Learn more about
opportunities to participate in RDS-WHOIS2 work at:
https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers.
In absence of
comments/edits, the ICANN62 engagement session description
will be considered approved.
Kind
regards,
Jean-Baptiste
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