Implementation:
This recommendation should
ideally be implemented post-GDPR implementation, but no later than [TBD months]
after the recommendation is adopted. The implementation should begin once
it is moderately clear how GDPR will be addressed with relation to gTLD RDS
(WHOIS). Should the implementation of this recommendation be deferred past
FY2020, the then existing RDS (WHOIS)-related parts of the ICANN web site must
be amended to cross-link the various sections on the RDS (WHOIS) portal, ICANN
Contractual Compliance, Registrar and ICANN Learn.
During copy edits, it was noticed that the first sentence still contained a placeholder [TBD months] and could be seen as duplicating and perhaps even conflicting with the second sentence. To resolve this, Alan has proposed deleting the first sentence and letting the second sentence alone address implementation timeframe.
Because this is more substantive than a copy edit, Alan asked that the RT be advised of this change. Any objection to this change should be raised to the RT list ASAP but no later than 29 August 23.59 UTC.
Regards,
Lisa