I support removal of the reference to RDAP review and WHOIS review in the Objectives section. Other than those, this seems ready for full publication. -Carlton ============================== *Carlton A Samuels* *Mobile: 876-818-1799Strategy, Planning, Governance, Assessment & Turnaround* ============================= On Mon, Nov 20, 2017 at 1:50 AM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> wrote:

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I have done a detailed review of the terms of reference and offer the following updated version. Note that this includes a number of Questions in the form of Comments inserted into the document.

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