Alan - I was recommending to make only few changes and wasn't recommending reviewing whole sections. It's a Google doc feature to color/signal a whole text section if one makes a comment related to a small part of this section. We're in agreement! Erika Sent from my iPhone

On Aug 23, 2018, at 4:27 AM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> wrote:

Thanks Erika. I've incorporated your changes. I have not attempted to rewrite the larger sections you drew attention to. There just is not enough time to do that now, and the Exec Summ will be subject to significant revision for the final report. I did make a few small changes though.

The revised version, and I hope FINAL for this report, is attached.

Alan

At 22/08/2018 02:23 PM, Erika Mann wrote:

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Hi Alan, hi Lisa -

I reviewed the text and send you an invite to a Google doc. I didn't send an invite to everyone because I'm aware that many of you can't open a Google doc.

Kind regards, Erika

On Wed, Aug 22, 2018 at 7:52 PM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca > wrote: Please find attached some minor edits to the Executive Summary as promised at Monday's meeting.

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