I have reviewed the recommendations and have a number of comments and suggestions. R5.1 - Phrase in BLUE added for clarification Specifically added: The ICANN Board should direct the ICANN Organization to look for potentially-anomalous ARS results (e.g., 40% of ARS-generated tickets closed with no action because the RDS (WHOIS) record changed between the time the ARS report was generated and the time the registration was reviewed by Contractual Compliance) to determine the underlying cause and take appropriate action to reduce anomalies. ====== R10.1 - PP deadline: By the time the Board accepts these recommendations (ie about July 2019) or 31 Dec 2019. ====== R10.2 - Should this be "RDS (WHOIS) review team" instead of "RDS-WHOIS review team"? ====== R11.2 - Strongly believe that the recommendation should be focused on results and not methodology for achieving that. And particularly should not focus on the methodologies which my be unable to predice desired results. Therefore remove reference to Port 43. Also, clarify why two versions may be needed. Suggested re-wording: The ICANN Board should direct the ICANN Organization to continue to maintain the common interface to keep up to date with new policy developments or contractual changes for contracted parties to ensure that the common interface will display all publicly-available RDS (WHOIS) output for each gTLD domain name registration available from contracted parties, i.e., when they differ, both the registry and registrar RDS (WHOIS) output could be shown in parallel. ====== CM.2 - I know I raised the is of whether this covered MISSING or does not meet current verification standards, but do not recall the result. ====== CM.4 - Perhaps too late to bring this up now, but do we want to consider a footnote saying we are considering expanding the Rec to include a Rec that CC consider different, more efficient methodology in analyzing bulk data submissions where such data identifies patterns of problems. ====== The specific changes to R5.1 and R11.2 are in the attached redline. Alan