Thanks for this updated draft Carlton.

Two items for this subgroup's consideration:

(1) Regarding this new text:
"...the PDP Working Group foundered and was shuttered in March 2018."

It would be more accurate to state that:

"...in April 2018, Next Generation RDS PDP WG meetings were suspended until further notice while awaiting guidance regarding how this PDP will be affected by GDPR compliance efforts. Formal action to suspend or terminate this PDP, in accordance with Policy Development Process procedures, is likely to occur after initiation of the Expedited PDP."

You might cite this leadership email as the source: https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/gnso-rds-pdp-wg/2018-April/005799.html

(2) It does not appear that the revised recommendation addresses Cathrin's comment:
https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-whoispolicy/2018-May/000016.html

In short, what is the specific, measurable board action suggested by the recommendation?

Best, Lisa

At 07:09 PM 7/17/2018, Carlton Samuels wrote:

Dear Team:
I have updated the subgroup report with additional content that shows how the Temporary Specification and the ePDP that is emerging from it will inure to the implementation of the Single WHOIS policy.

Please do have a look and emend/comment, as necessary.Ā Once that is done, I will make the adjustment in placement of content suggested by Lisa's guide.

Best,
-Carlton

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On Tue, Apr 3, 2018 at 8:50 PM Carlton Samuels < carlton.samuels@gmail.com> wrote:

Dear Team:

I have taken a stab at the first draft of our subgroup report.Ā Please emend as you see fit.

The deadline for delivery of our report isĀ Thursday,April 5.

Best,

-Carlton

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On Tue, Mar 20, 2018 at 7:32 AM, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org > wrote:

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Please find attached a copy of the written briefing for your recommendation that was just circulated to the RT mailing-list.

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As a reminder, you can find the subgroup report template at: https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/71604697/Proposed%20Subgroup%20Report%20Structure.docx?version=1&modificationDate=1519202465000&api=v2

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