Emily and Team:

My comments / edits attached.

Thanks--

J.

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Subject: [Rt4-whois] Draft letter to compliance - YOUR FEEDBACK PLEASE
From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu>
Date: Thu, November 03, 2011 7:09 am
To: rt4-whois@icann.org

Hi all

In Dakar, as a result of our communications with the Compliance team, we agreed to lift a lot of the detail out of our report, and write them a letter with our findings.

Here is my first draft.  I would be grateful for your honest feedback, and particularly suggestions for shortening it. 

Thanks

Emily



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