Hi all

Peter, Kathy and I have used the time differences between us since Saturday to iterate and re-iterate this section.  Peter has meetings back to back for the rest of the week; Kathy and I have lost the ability to read, write or speak.

Because there have now been so many changes (mainly of order, but some of text), I have tried to present this as a clean draft.  However, it has not been possible for me to get rid of the highlighting  (I think they've got stuck there because we're all working on different versions of Word, Open Office, Word for Mac etc).

So, with apologies to Kathy and Peter I am sharing this now in order to get your comments before we sign off on the draft report tomorrow.

Let me have any show stoppers, silly typos, or other comments as soon as you can.

You will see that we've made an attempt to draw out some conclusions / findings, working from the Dakar draft on proxy/privacy, and plagiarising liberally from the Exec Summary.  At the end are a load of definitions, which are clearly out of place where they are, but I just left them in so that we don't forget about them.

Thank you.

Kind regards

Emily

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