Thanks Kathy,
Seth, Susan and I are making progress on the Consumer Trust chapter but not ready to send an update yet.
Lynn 
 
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Subject: [Rt4-whois] Newest version of our Reprt
From: Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com>
Date: Mon, November 28, 2011 10:31 am
To: "rt4-whois@icann.org" <rt4-whois@icann.org>

Dear All,
I hope you had a great weekend, and a good holiday. In the background, I see many groups working, exchanging email, and talking. Tx you!

Emily and I have been talking on a daily basis to massage the report into shape, and she, I would like to share and wanted to share the most up-to-date version of our edited report. Alice, could you kindly post this to our Wiki?

Quick notes;
    - report follows editing format we we agreed on Wednesday -- not using track changes, but instead a format that keeps all the text within the report to show the proposed changes: e.g., [KK Add: ] [KK Delete: ].
    - chapter breaks, titles, and material rearranged a bit into a different order.  It's all still there!  Lynn's chapter, Sarmad's chapter, all given prominence in new chapters
    - More and bolded subtitles, etc., to make the document easier to scan

Longer note: Emily, Peter and I have worked this weekend on the Gap Analysis, and breaking it into two chapters. Please note that Chapters 7/8 are not updated in the current draft -- and we'll be circulating a proposed draft within the day.

All the best and enjoy,
Kathy


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