Version du jour for Nov 11 (Attached)

Note that I changed the statistical figures, and moved the chart below the narrative.  Some phrases were better directed at other organs (e.g., GNSO or ICANN Community) so I either changed or removed those.

Thanks--

J.

-------- Original Message --------
Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Letter to Compliance (Additional Edit)
From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu>
Date: Fri, November 11, 2011 3:36 am
To: "James M. Bladel" <jbladel@godaddy.com>
Cc: RT4 WHOIS <rt4-whois@icann.org>

Hi James

Thanks, your text changes are very helpful.  I have also looked at your other comments throughout the text.  Would you like to propose alternative language to build on your comments?  I would appreciate it if you could do so.

Kind regards


Emily


On 11 November 2011 05:15, James M. Bladel <jbladel@godaddy.com> wrote:
Team:

Per our most recent call, I've made a few slight edits to the Letter to Compliance (draft).  The changes are:

*  Corrected "Registries and Registries" to read "Registries and Registrars" in two instances.
*  Struck "regulated" and inserted "monitored."
*  Added bullet point noting the technical & operational challenges faced by ICANN Compliance.  To ensure that this is appropriately attributed, I put this squarely on my head (at minimum).

Thank you,

J.


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