Dear Review Team members,

Please find attached the most recent version of the master document.

This version contains the following:

Lynn's edits including review of Sharon and Law Enforcement's comments
Susan's additional quotes from comments (NCUC, ALAC)
The Dakar definitions
Emily's language – findings section
The best practices text (Susan, Kathy and James)
Lutz' recommendations (along with alternatives - please refer to Kathy's email - No agreement on Lutz's recommendations - 1 Dec 22:51 UTC).

Please proofread all and closely examine text, in particular 7,8,9.

Note that footnotes have been added and that typos have been found.

I *believe* this document is up-to-date. Should you notice a missing piece of information or inconsistencies, please email me asap so that I can rectify for subsequent versions.

The document is also available on the wiki at: https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreviewprivate/Draft+report

Thanks,

Kind regards

Alice

Alice Jansen

Assistant, Organizational Reviews

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