I think I agree with most of James’ comments concerning what is not within Compliance’s purview but I am wondering if we cannot keep the content but soften it so that it does not sound like a directive to Compliance.  So, in other words, Compliance could study and respond to a GNSO’s studies not because it is obliged to but because it could help improve the quality of the work that it is tasked with.

As far as shortening, if it’s going to take the form of a letter in the appendix, I am wondering if shortening is really that important.  

Seth

From: rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of James M. Bladel
Sent: Thursday, November 03, 2011 7:00 AM
To: Emily Taylor
Cc: rt4-whois@icann.org
Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Draft letter to compliance - YOUR FEEDBACK PLEASE

Emily and Team:

My comments / edits attached.

Thanks--

J.

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Subject: [Rt4-whois] Draft letter to compliance - YOUR FEEDBACK PLEASE
From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu>
Date: Thu, November 03, 2011 7:09 am
To: rt4-whois@icann.org

Hi all

In Dakar, as a result of our communications with the Compliance team, we agreed to lift a lot of the detail out of our report, and write them a letter with our findings.

Here is my first draft.  I would be grateful for your honest feedback, and particularly suggestions for shortening it. 

Thanks

Emily



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