I always stand for shorter ‘main body’ and informative appendices. Support Lynn: however, at least some words on WHOIS system should be in the
main text.
Rgds,
M.
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Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] DNS and WHOIS - How it Works
Hi Lynn
Interesting suggestion. Any others share this view?
Best,
Emily
On 29 November 2011 20:05, <lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com> wrote:
Suggestion: Change from Chapter to Appendix
After reading through the Draft Report, it seems to me that the section
on "DNS and WHOIS- How it Works" should be an Appendix rather than in the main body of the report.
While it is useful to have as reference for the reader, it somewhat disrupts the thought flow of the
assessment and paper.
-Lynn
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