Hi Alice, Hi All

We had some to-ing and fro-ing on the Executive Summary, and the attachment dated 20 October is the latest version that I'm aware of.  This is of the whole report, and is prone to misbehave/crash.

So, I'm also attaching a clean copy with the changes accepted and Bill's request (that we acknowledge that WHOIS was done by default) taken in.  As discussed on the latest call, I have highlighted additional text which I have put in.  Some of this fills in place holders (eg the one describing our work), another section which was missing was some discussion of consumer trust.  I have made a first attempt here.

Alice - please can you add this version into your consolidated draft of the report.

I also suggest that we get rid of the "notebook" format in Word.  I find it difficult to work with, and am convinced that all it's weird formatting might be responsible for the instability that we're finding in the document.

Alice - please would you also keep the appendices as a separate document for now, this will focus our attention on the core report in the coming days.

Many thanks

Emily
---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu>
Date: 8 November 2011 17:54
Subject: Executive Summary
To: "Smith, Bill" <bill.smith@paypal-inc.com>, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>
Cc: Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com>, lynn@goodsecurityconsulting.com, Sharon Lemon <sharonchallis@aol.com>


Hi there

Thanks for this - I've read it many times now, and love it.

I started editing in the consolidated document posted on the private wiki, and it's crashed, corrupted and whatever.

Anyway, tried to copy the content into a single file so that it's not too huge, but it died.  Anyway, here's the whole report, with some suggested edits for the Exec Summary.  I think the file might be dodgy so let me know if you can't open it.

I think I agree with Sharon's original comment that (to a Brit at least) it reads quite emotionally.  Over this side of the Atlantic, we are suspicious of emotion and immediately mistrust it.  That's our hang up, not yours, but I did want to try and make the point so that we can reach as broad an audience as possible.

Thanks

Emily



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