Hi All,
I sat down with three screens open and tried to work my way through
the Executive Summary (as promised in our meeting Wed). I referenced
our original report, slides from the Public Forum, texts that Alice
has finalized, and Comment Summary that Alice prepared. In addition
to a few edits to the text to remove a few "rough edges," I tried to
cut and paste all the new texts for Findings and Recommendations. No
promises, but I did the best I could :-)!
Overall, I think this reads very well. I like how the findings and
recommendations flow... and I think our work shows!
If there are some quick edits over the weekend, I may put them
in, but otherwise, I pass the pen to Alice, and ask her to post
this with our other new sections for review and comment.
Have a good weekend,
Kathy