Hi James
Thanks, your text changes are very helpful. I have also looked at your other comments throughout the text. Would you like to propose alternative language to build on your comments? I would appreciate it if you could do so.
Kind regards
Emily
Team:
Per our most recent call, I've made a few slight edits to the Letter to Compliance (draft). The changes are:* Corrected "Registries and Registries" to read "Registries and Registrars" in two instances.* Struck "regulated" and inserted "monitored."* Added bullet point noting the technical & operational challenges faced by ICANN Compliance. To ensure that this is appropriately attributed, I put this squarely on my head (at minimum).Thank you,J.
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