Whole report - a proposal
Hi there Alice has pulled together all the new text into the old document, and of course there are some issues with integration. I will go through the entire text carefully as soon as possible, but want to highlight one item for you. Please raise any objections to my proposal below as soon as poss: The section "Conclusions" in the draft report mostly reproduces our new "findings" but not always. So, the text for IDNs, Compliance, data accuracy largely maps what was originally there. One area where it our old conclusions are more expansive is "privacy and proxy". I suggest that Kathy and/or I combine the Conclusions with Findings. Where the text is the same, fine. Where it is different, we will copy it over, unless it is inconsistent with our amended recommendations. It should just be copy paste job, but I will let you know of any text changes. E -- * * 76 Temple Road, Oxford OX4 2EZ UK t: +44 (0)1865 582 811 • m: +44 (0)7540 049 322 emily@emilytaylor.eu *www.etlaw.co.uk* Emily Taylor Consultancy Limited is a company registered in England and Wales No. 7630471. VAT No. 114487713.
Hi All I have now done this. Basically just copy pasted anything that was missing. Looking carefully at proxy/privacy, it seems that the work moved on between our draft and full report, and have therefore deleted the old "conclusions" on privacy proxy, and left instead the Findings as they were carefully negotiated recently. Shout if you disagree. E ---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu> Date: 3 May 2012 12:07 Subject: Whole report - a proposal To: rt4-whois@icann.org Hi there Alice has pulled together all the new text into the old document, and of course there are some issues with integration. I will go through the entire text carefully as soon as possible, but want to highlight one item for you. Please raise any objections to my proposal below as soon as poss: The section "Conclusions" in the draft report mostly reproduces our new "findings" but not always. So, the text for IDNs, Compliance, data accuracy largely maps what was originally there. One area where it our old conclusions are more expansive is "privacy and proxy". I suggest that Kathy and/or I combine the Conclusions with Findings. Where the text is the same, fine. Where it is different, we will copy it over, unless it is inconsistent with our amended recommendations. It should just be copy paste job, but I will let you know of any text changes. E -- * * 76 Temple Road, Oxford OX4 2EZ UK t: +44 (0)1865 582 811 • m: +44 (0)7540 049 322 emily@emilytaylor.eu *www.etlaw.co.uk* Emily Taylor Consultancy Limited is a company registered in England and Wales No. 7630471. VAT No. 114487713. -- * * 76 Temple Road, Oxford OX4 2EZ UK t: +44 (0)1865 582 811 • m: +44 (0)7540 049 322 emily@emilytaylor.eu *www.etlaw.co.uk* Emily Taylor Consultancy Limited is a company registered in England and Wales No. 7630471. VAT No. 114487713.
Hi Emily, Thanks for clarifying. The new findings text was finely balanced in places, so I think your approach of leaving it untouched seems sensible to me. Cheers, Peter From: rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Emily Taylor Sent: Thursday, 3 May 2012 9:30 PM To: rt4-whois@icann.org Subject: [Rt4-whois] Fwd: Whole report - a proposal Hi All I have now done this. Basically just copy pasted anything that was missing. Looking carefully at proxy/privacy, it seems that the work moved on between our draft and full report, and have therefore deleted the old "conclusions" on privacy proxy, and left instead the Findings as they were carefully negotiated recently. Shout if you disagree. E ---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu<mailto:emily@emilytaylor.eu>> Date: 3 May 2012 12:07 Subject: Whole report - a proposal To: rt4-whois@icann.org<mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org> Hi there Alice has pulled together all the new text into the old document, and of course there are some issues with integration. I will go through the entire text carefully as soon as possible, but want to highlight one item for you. Please raise any objections to my proposal below as soon as poss: The section "Conclusions" in the draft report mostly reproduces our new "findings" but not always. So, the text for IDNs, Compliance, data accuracy largely maps what was originally there. One area where it our old conclusions are more expansive is "privacy and proxy". I suggest that Kathy and/or I combine the Conclusions with Findings. Where the text is the same, fine. Where it is different, we will copy it over, unless it is inconsistent with our amended recommendations. It should just be copy paste job, but I will let you know of any text changes. E -- [http://www.etlaw.co.uk/images/stories/etlaw/etclogo250x60.gif] 76 Temple Road, Oxford OX4 2EZ UK t: +44 (0)1865 582 811<tel:%2B44%20%280%291865%20582%20811> * m: +44 (0)7540 049 322<tel:%2B44%20%280%297540%20049%20322> emily@emilytaylor.eu<mailto:emily@emilytaylor.eu> www.etlaw.co.uk<http://www.etlaw.co.uk> Emily Taylor Consultancy Limited is a company registered in England and Wales No. 7630471. VAT No. 114487713. -- [http://www.etlaw.co.uk/images/stories/etlaw/etclogo250x60.gif] 76 Temple Road, Oxford OX4 2EZ UK t: +44 (0)1865 582 811 * m: +44 (0)7540 049 322 emily@emilytaylor.eu<mailto:emily@emilytaylor.eu> www.etlaw.co.uk<http://www.etlaw.co.uk> Emily Taylor Consultancy Limited is a company registered in England and Wales No. 7630471. VAT No. 114487713. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- NOTICE: This email message is for the sole use of the intended recipient(s) and may contain confidential and privileged information. Any unauthorized review, use, disclosure or distribution is prohibited. If you are not the intended recipient, please contact the sender by reply email and destroy all copies of the original message. This message has been content scanned by the Axway MailGate. MailGate uses policy enforcement to scan for known viruses, spam, undesirable content and malicious code. For more information on Axway products please visit www.axway.com. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Sorry, I can't picture it. Is there a redline? Tx! Kathy' :
Hi Emily,
Thanks for clarifying. The new findings text was finely balanced in places, so I think your approach of leaving it untouched seems sensible to me.
Cheers,
Peter
*From:*rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Emily Taylor *Sent:* Thursday, 3 May 2012 9:30 PM *To:* rt4-whois@icann.org *Subject:* [Rt4-whois] Fwd: Whole report - a proposal
Hi All
I have now done this. Basically just copy pasted anything that was missing.
Looking carefully at proxy/privacy, it seems that the work moved on between our draft and full report, and have therefore deleted the old "conclusions" on privacy proxy, and left instead the Findings as they were carefully negotiated recently.
Shout if you disagree.
E
---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: *Emily Taylor* <emily@emilytaylor.eu <mailto:emily@emilytaylor.eu>> Date: 3 May 2012 12:07 Subject: Whole report - a proposal To: rt4-whois@icann.org <mailto:rt4-whois@icann.org>
Hi there
Alice has pulled together all the new text into the old document, and of course there are some issues with integration.
I will go through the entire text carefully as soon as possible, but want to highlight one item for you. Please raise any objections to my proposal below as soon as poss:
The section "Conclusions" in the draft report mostly reproduces our new "findings" but not always. So, the text for IDNs, Compliance, data accuracy largely maps what was originally there. One area where it our old conclusions are more expansive is "privacy and proxy". I suggest that Kathy and/or I combine the Conclusions with Findings. Where the text is the same, fine. Where it is different, we will copy it over, unless it is inconsistent with our amended recommendations.
It should just be copy paste job, but I will let you know of any text changes.
E
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Emily Taylor -
Kathy Kleiman -
Nettlefold, Peter