Recommendations - here attached
Hi All, To the Chapters 7 and 8 that Emily circulated today (an expansion of the Gap Analysis from one chapter into two to make it more readable), let me add Chapter 9, Recommendations. Chapter 9 is also separated out from the Gap Analysis to create a separate place for our Recommendations. The entire report leads up to them, and I guess they are the climax of our story. We worked hard to take our Dakar and MDR recommendations, remove duplicates, and clarify languages (so that all references are clear, etc.). There are still a few blanks to be filled in, so if you know the answers, please let the group know. Two copies attached: a "clean" one, and one with the full set of edits shown. I'll be online for awhile, so please let me know if you can't read the files. Best, Kathy --
Classification: UNCLASSIFIED Thanks Kathy for circulating these versions - they're very helpful. The first thing I noticed was that the recommendation for a consumer portal seems to be missing. I assume this wasn't intentional? The second relates to the privacy related recommendations, which I commented on earlier. On that issue, my comments and concerns remain. I'll keep reading, but wanted to share my initial thoughts as soon as I could. Cheers Peter ----- Original Message ----- From: Kathy Kleiman [mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com] Sent: Wednesday, November 30, 2011 02:06 PM To: rt4-whois@icann.org <rt4-whois@icann.org> Subject: [Rt4-whois] Recommendations - here attached Hi All, To the Chapters 7 and 8 that Emily circulated today (an expansion of the Gap Analysis from one chapter into two to make it more readable), let me add Chapter 9, Recommendations. Chapter 9 is also separated out from the Gap Analysis to create a separate place for our Recommendations. The entire report leads up to them, and I guess they are the climax of our story. We worked hard to take our Dakar and MDR recommendations, remove duplicates, and clarify languages (so that all references are clear, etc.). There are still a few blanks to be filled in, so if you know the answers, please let the group know. Two copies attached: a "clean" one, and one with the full set of edits shown. I'll be online for awhile, so please let me know if you can't read the files. Best, Kathy -- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- NOTICE: This email message is for the sole use of the intended recipient(s) and may contain confidential and privileged information. Any unauthorized review, use, disclosure or distribution is prohibited. If you are not the intended recipient, please contact the sender by reply email and destroy all copies of the original message. This message has been content scanned by the Axway MailGate. MailGate uses policy enforcement to scan for known viruses, spam, undesirable content and malicious code. For more information on Axway products please visit www.axway.com. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Quick answers to Peter's question in text below
Classification: UNCLASSIFIED
Thanks Kathy for circulating these versions - they're very helpful.
The first thing I noticed was that the recommendation for a consumer portal seems to be missing. I assume this wasn't intentional? ==> No, not intentional. Just in a different place. Does someone have easy access to the current text?
The second relates to the privacy related recommendations, which I commented on earlier. On that issue, my comments and concerns remain. ==> Noted. Not sure how to resolve. Will leave this to Emily.
I'll keep reading, but wanted to share my initial thoughts as soon as I could. ==> Tx you, and thank you for all the work on Chapters 7 and 8. Cheers
Peter
----- Original Message ----- From: Kathy Kleiman [mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com] Sent: Wednesday, November 30, 2011 02:06 PM To: rt4-whois@icann.org<rt4-whois@icann.org> Subject: [Rt4-whois] Recommendations - here attached
Hi All, To the Chapters 7 and 8 that Emily circulated today (an expansion of the Gap Analysis from one chapter into two to make it more readable), let me add Chapter 9, Recommendations.
Chapter 9 is also separated out from the Gap Analysis to create a separate place for our Recommendations. The entire report leads up to them, and I guess they are the climax of our story.
We worked hard to take our Dakar and MDR recommendations, remove duplicates, and clarify languages (so that all references are clear, etc.). There are still a few blanks to be filled in, so if you know the answers, please let the group know.
Two copies attached: a "clean" one, and one with the full set of edits shown.
I'll be online for awhile, so please let me know if you can't read the files. Best, Kathy
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