Seth, James Many thanks for your feedback. It would be helpful if you could suggest some edits in the text to take it on to the next stage. Kind regards Emily On 7 November 2011 17:59, Seth M Reiss <seth.reiss@lex-ip.com> wrote:

I think I agree with most of James’ comments concerning what is not within Compliance’s purview but I am wondering if we cannot keep the content but soften it so that it does not sound like a directive to Compliance. So, in other words, Compliance could study and respond to a GNSO’s studies not because it is obliged to but because it could help improve the quality of the work that it is tasked with.****

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As far as shortening, if it’s going to take the form of a letter in the appendix, I am wondering if shortening is really that important. ****

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*From:* rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org] *On Behalf Of *James M. Bladel *Sent:* Thursday, November 03, 2011 7:00 AM *To:* Emily Taylor *Cc:* rt4-whois@icann.org *Subject:* Re: [Rt4-whois] Draft letter to compliance - YOUR FEEDBACK PLEASE****

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Emily and Team:

My comments / edits attached.****

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-------- Original Message -------- Subject: [Rt4-whois] Draft letter to compliance - YOUR FEEDBACK PLEASE From: Emily Taylor <emily@emilytaylor.eu> Date: Thu, November 03, 2011 7:09 am To: rt4-whois@icann.org

Hi all

In Dakar, as a result of our communications with the Compliance team, we agreed to lift a lot of the detail out of our report, and write them a letter with our findings.

Here is my first draft. I would be grateful for your honest feedback, and particularly suggestions for shortening it.

Thanks

Emily

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