Dear All,

I have done and editing pass, and I have suggested some substantive edits for your consideration.  Kindly review.

Regards,
Sarmad

From: RZ-LGR-SG <rz-lgr-sg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG" <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org>
Reply-To: Dennis Tan Tanaka <dtantanaka@verisign.com>
Date: Friday, September 6, 2019 at 7:42 PM
To: "Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG" <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [RZ-LGR-SG] INPUT REQUIRED - Final Draft 4 Sep 2019

Gently reminder. Please review the latest final draft by end of day today; if you have any comments please record those in document or by email to this list.

Monday meeting is cancelled. I don’t see a reason to hold the call on Monday, so we’ll cancel it and continue the conversation on the mailing list.

As next steps:

• On Tuesday 9/10 and Wednesday 9/11, Sarmad and I will do a proofreading check, and
• On Thursday 9/12 the document will be circulated for a final call until Friday 9/13 (please note you should not wait until the final call to suggest material changes, so please review the document now while it is a draft)

Enjoy the weekend.

Best,

Dennis

From: Dennis Tan Tanaka <dtantanaka@verisign.com>
Date: Wednesday, September 4, 2019 at 11:50 AM
To: "Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG" <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org>
Subject: INPUT REQUIRED - Final Draft 4 Sep 2019

Dear all,

A revised draft (ver 4 Sep 2019) is ready for your review and input. This version:

1. Incorporates the proposed language from Edmon for Appendix B, option B.

2. Has editorial edits

3. Includes a new recommendation 7 as a result of breaking former recommendation 11 into two parts (one for GP and one for GNSO/ccNSO). So now we have a total of 12 recommendations.

Please take some time to review this latest draft and register your comments/observations on the document itself or send via email to the list. As of now I intend to cancel next Monday’s call but we’ll decide that later based on the input we receive on the draft. PLEASE COMPLETE YOUR REVIEW BY FRIDAY 6^th.

Let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks,
Dennis