Dear Dennis,

Thanks for sharing the slides. I have gone through it and it looks great. However I have minor comments. In slide 3 where the phrase "single source" appears I would suggest to replace it with "single source or repository". Somewhere in the slides particularly on the slide that describes the scope I feel the need to emphasize the SG's scope in general terms like the SG is scoped to address "Technical Issues related to RZ_LGR". Slide 7 looks to me redundant and I suggest its removal.

Kind regards,

Dessalegn

On Wed, Sep 26, 2018 at 9:07 PM Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> wrote:

All,

 

I put this slides together for a brief update at ICANN 63. As you will see they are meant as a guide for the presentation and not as a script to read from, except for a few slides in which longer text is better.

 

Slides 7 and 8 basically convey the same thing, but are in different formats. I’m still debating myself as to which one to remove.

 

Let me know your thoughts, did I miss anything? Please send me your comments in the Notes section of the corresponding slide or just write an email.

 

I would like to deliver a final deck to Sarmad by end of this week, so if you can give me your comments by Friday, that’d be great.

 

Thank you,

Dennis

 

 

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