Dear All,

Thank you Dennis, all for finalizing the document. 

I have done a copy-editing pass and made some non-substantive edits.  Edits include making the intention clearer, expanding the acronyms, minor grammar issues and any formatting.  I will finalize the formatting once we transfer to a word document for publishing.  Kindly review.

Regards,
Sarmad

From: RZ-LGR-SG <rz-lgr-sg-bounces@icann.org> On Behalf Of Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG
Sent: Monday, May 13, 2019 7:33 PM
To: rz-lgr-sg@icann.org
Subject: [RZ-LGR-SG] Version 1.1 for final review

Dear SG,

Per our meeting today please find the latest version 1.1 in the link below. As discussed we incorporated some comments to Recommendation 11.

Please send your comments to Recommendation 11 by tomorrow, May 14, noon UTC -4 (New York).

Thank you,

Dennis

URL to google doc https://docs.google.com/document/d/11zWxuuHOy-IMXwaJE8wSSch0M8Mgd9xdpAji0-1Bz68/edit?usp=sharing [docs.google.com]