Looks good.

I have two general suggestions..

Slide 5 - Scope of work has small characters, from distance they become non-readable, either we break this into two slides or set up with bigger fonts. I have faced this in my LGR presentations.

Slide 4- It can be sorted by name or organisation, as per your choice.

Thanks.

All,

I put this slides together for a brief update at ICANN 63. As you will see they are meant as a guide for the presentation and not as a script to read from, except for a few slides in which longer text is better.

Slides 7 and 8 basically convey the same thing, but are in different formats. I’m still debating myself as to which one to remove.

Let me know your thoughts, did I miss anything? Please send me your comments in the Notes section of the corresponding slide or just write an email.

I would like to deliver a final deck to Sarmad by end of this week, so if you can give me your comments by Friday, that’d be great.

Thank you,

Dennis