Geoff and I have put some new text in the working document.

<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_eOj_csXgOi3hzkobsY6SgA7b4CcMPhTLKvQ_8FZRXg/> 

-Old Section 5 moved to a new Section 9

-Three new paragraphs added to beginning of Section 3

-New paragraph in Section 4

-Significant edits made to the two paragraphs following the new paragraph in Section 4

-New text added to end of Sections 5.1, 5.2, and 5.4

-New Section 5.5 added 

The big chunks have been commented with “New Text” while the smaller chunks have been left as Suggestions.

Thanks,

Andrew