Jennifer:

Thanks for the review and revised wording. I’ll incorporate this adjustment unless other RT members comment. Regarding your questions:
 
1) Regarding "Emergency Back-end Registry Operator (EBERO)", should it be Back-End to match the capitalization in the acronym? – Comms pointed me to this page, which is the usage they are following:https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/ebero-2013-04-02-en 

Okay.  That is clear enough.

2) Will Table 1 be scaled down to fit the page width? See p19 for how it looks in PDF format.  

Okay.  That works, just barely making it.

Russ