Hi Russ,
Thanks for the review and revised wording. I’ll incorporate this adjustment unless other RT members comment. Regarding your questions:
1) Regarding "Emergency Back-end Registry Operator (EBERO)", should it be Back-End to match the capitalization in the acronym? –
Comms pointed me to this page, which is the usage they are following:
https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/ebero-2013-04-02-en
2) Will Table 1 be scaled down to fit the page width?
See p19 for how it looks in PDF format.
Best,
Jennifer
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Jennifer Bryce
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Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
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From: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
Date: Wednesday, 20 January 2021 at 12:27
To: Jennifer Bryce <jennifer.bryce@icann.org>
Cc: ICANN SSR2 <ssr2-review@icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] Re: [Ssr2-review] For Review: SSR2 Final Report
I reviewed the redlines. Something is wrong with the wording starting on page 52 for two or three pages. In the attachment, I offer corrections.
I also have two questions:
1) Regarding "Emergency Back-end Registry Operator (EBERO)", should it be Back-End to match the capitalization in the acronym?
2) Will Table 1 be scaled down to fit the page width?
Russ