Dear all, Please see here for the reworked abuse section, to be discussed on tomorrow’s call: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PdjkR6i_FdXuFTomxptVpLVVtORRTgrrnVQ-vSpm... (suggest only) You can see the new structure involves a longer, general findings section, followed by a section with recommendations, interspersed with some specific findings and our (proposed) outlook and expectations. Please comment and suggest changes, as always use suggest mode only. Heather is still actively working in this document because the subteam did a lot of work that took some time. Thus, please excuse white spaces, etc Tomorrow, we can discuss the broader changes and agree if this makes sense, and get some discussion and maybe consensus on how to move forward. All the best Laurin
Team: We had a good call today. Please enter all editorial suggestion (in suggest mode) and comments before the team call on November 5th. Russ
From: "Weissinger, Laurin" <laurin.weissinger@yale.edu> Subject: [Ssr2-review] Abuse section redesign Date: October 28, 2020 at 2:12:53 PM EDT To: SSR2 Review <ssr2-review@icann.org>
Dear all,
Please see here for the reworked abuse section, to be discussed on tomorrow’s call: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PdjkR6i_FdXuFTomxptVpLVVtORRTgrrnVQ-vSpm... (suggest only)
You can see the new structure involves a longer, general findings section, followed by a section with recommendations, interspersed with some specific findings and our (proposed) outlook and expectations.
Please comment and suggest changes, as always use suggest mode only. Heather is still actively working in this document because the subteam did a lot of work that took some time. Thus, please excuse white spaces, etc
Tomorrow, we can discuss the broader changes and agree if this makes sense, and get some discussion and maybe consensus on how to move forward.
All the best Laurin
REMINDER: Please enter all editorial suggestion (in suggest mode) and comments before the team call on November 5th. Russ
From: "Weissinger, Laurin" <laurin.weissinger@yale.edu <mailto:laurin.weissinger@yale.edu>> Subject: [Ssr2-review] Abuse section redesign Date: October 28, 2020 at 2:12:53 PM EDT To: SSR2 Review <ssr2-review@icann.org <mailto:ssr2-review@icann.org>>
Dear all,
Please see here for the reworked abuse section, to be discussed on tomorrow’s call: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PdjkR6i_FdXuFTomxptVpLVVtORRTgrrnVQ-vSpm... <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PdjkR6i_FdXuFTomxptVpLVVtORRTgrrnVQ-vSpm...> (suggest only)
You can see the new structure involves a longer, general findings section, followed by a section with recommendations, interspersed with some specific findings and our (proposed) outlook and expectations.
Please comment and suggest changes, as always use suggest mode only. Heather is still actively working in this document because the subteam did a lot of work that took some time. Thus, please excuse white spaces, etc
Tomorrow, we can discuss the broader changes and agree if this makes sense, and get some discussion and maybe consensus on how to move forward.
All the best Laurin
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