Hello Anne,
Thanks for your input.
Regarding the point that Community Registration Policies proposed for inclusion in the RA are subject to RCE – this is mentioned in multiple places throughout Topic 9, including Section 4.
This is also one of the reasons why we group RVCs and Community Registration Policies together under Topic 9.
For the ease of reference, please see the page/section numbers and quotes where this point has been made:
That’s a fair point that a reader who only focuses on Section 4 on p.21 may not make the mental connection between Community Registration Policy and Registry Voluntary Commitments. As such,
I suggested a redline edit by including the phrase “Same as proposed Registry Voluntary Commitments (RVCs) for inclusion in the RA” at the beginning of the second paragraph, and also made an additional redline edit by inserting “…subject to the Registry
Commitments Evaluation (RCE)” at the end of the second sentence of the first paragraph.
That being said, RVCs and Comm Reg Policies are not exactly equal, as the latter is a required element for an application to qualify as a Community-based TLD application, while the former is
optional (with the exception to the ones pursuant to Section 3.2.3.1).
I hope this helps address your concern.
Best Regards,
Ariel
From:
Anne ICANN <anneicanngnso@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, May 1, 2025 at 4:23 PM
To: Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org>
Cc: "subpro-irt@icann.org" <subpro-irt@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: [SubPro-IRT] Updated Topic 9 AGB Text: PICs/RVCs/Community Registration Policies
Thanks Ariel. Where in that paragraph do we say "Community Registration Policies which the applicant wishes to be considered in Community Priority Evaluation must first be approved by ICANN in accordance with the Registry Commitment Evaluation
(RCE) procedure. The string will not be eligible for the CPE process until such policies pass RCE."
I don't think the average reader actually equates "Community Registration Policies" with RVCs that will be the subject of RCE. RVC and RCE are not mentioned even once in this section. The above needs to be set out clearly in this Section
on page 21.
Thank you,
Anne
On Wed, Apr 30, 2025 at 11:11 AM Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org> wrote:
Thanks Anne! I made some suggested redline update in Section 4 [docs.google.com] (p.21), incorporating your input. I hope this helps clarify?
Best Regards,
Ariel
From: Anne ICANN <anneicanngnso@gmail.com>
Date: Tuesday, April 29, 2025 at 5:37 PM
To: Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org>
Cc: "subpro-irt@icann.org" <subpro-irt@icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] Re: [SubPro-IRT] Updated Topic 9 AGB Text: PICs/RVCs/Community Registration Policies
Thanks Ariel. I still think we need to state clearly on page 21 re Community Registration Policies that a Community applicant must have approval of its RVCs (or an approved Change Request to drop the RVC that is not approved) before an application can proceed to CPE.
Thank you,
Anne
On Tue, Apr 29, 2025 at 7:55 AM Ariel Liang via SubPro-IRT <subpro-irt@icann.org> wrote:
Dear IRT Members,
Please find here the updated Topic 9 AGB text in preparation for our call on 8 May.
- Clean version: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v150Usag-3uYRH2e8pSjWa49k9nWcytM963JSTMAaUk/edit?tab=t.0 - heading=h.ri1736pcfxf1 [docs.google.com]
- Redline version (compared to the version published for Public Comment – see v05_2025-05-08): https://icann-community.atlassian.net/wiki/spaces/SPIR/pages/112200175/1.+Working+Documents - :~:text=Proposed AGB Language_v05_2025-05-08 %5BRedlines%5D.pdf [icann-community.atlassian.net]
Please note that the updates reflect input received from public comments, which we discussed during the 16 April [icann-community.atlassian.net] meeting. In addition, there are substantive updates for footnote 11 (pp.10-11), Section 3.2.4 (pp.15), footnote 13 (p.16), and first paragraph of Section 4 and footnote 19 (p.21). These updates intend to address input from the IRT during our 16 April meeting.
Look forward to our discussion next week!
Best Regards,
Ariel
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