Thanks for this Jamie.  I regret not taking a closer look earlier, but you know how busy we are these days.  Attached are a few redline comments.
I think the report, while recognizing that technically the policy is not in scope for the work of this team, should at least mention that many of us have repeatedly said this is a nonsense and the policy needs to be revisited.  To simply submit this as it stands invites all kinds of reaction which might not be conducive to reasonable outcomes.

Kind regards Stephanie Perrin
On 2015-08-04 18:40, Jamie Hedlund wrote:
All,

Attached please find a redlined draft report in Word and PDF. For tomorrow’s call, I would propose reviewing the changes from the last draft and next steps. While I regret not being able to circulate the revised draft sooner, the number of changes are fairly limited.

Best,
Jamie

Jamie Hedlund
VP, Strategic Programs
Global Domains Division
ICANN
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jamie.hedlund@icann.org

From: <whois-iag-volunteers-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund@icann.org>
Date: Wednesday, July 8, 2015 at 15:00
To: "whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org" <whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>
Subject: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft report

All,

Attached please find a draft report for the IAG’s review and consideration. We propose that discussion of the draft be the sole agenda item for Monday’s call. If you have any comments or edits before then please feel free to send those to the mailing list. Thank you.

Best,
Jamie 

Jamie Hedlund
VP, Strategic Programs
Global Domains Division
ICANN
+1.202.374.3969 (m)
+1.202.570.7125 (d)
 

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