No, Jamie, there are a number of amendments and additions in the body of the text.

Since your version is in .docx and my edits are in .odt, track changes does not seem to work.
(I do not know how to do 'red-lining')

I suggest that if you do a 'compare documents' you will get the changes.

Otherwise: Search for 'N.B.'  and for 'applicable'' and you will get most of them.

Regards

CW




On 17 Sep 2015, at 19:50, Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund@icann.org> wrote:

Christopher,

Thank you. Could you please confirm that the only change you made to the base text was the addition of Appendix 3? Since the document is not redlined I wanted to make sure we captured your proposed edits. Thanks again.

Best,
Jamie

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From: Christopher Wilkinson <cw@christopherwilkinson.eu>
Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 13:24
To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund@icann.org>
Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org" <whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report

Good evening:

Please find attached my edits to the draft preliminary report.

With many thanks for your attention

Regards

Christopher Wilkinson