Leon,

Do you want to send this deliverable to the CCWG so that there will be some time for review, or shall I?

Greg

On Mon, Nov 2, 2015 at 9:48 PM, Paul Twomey <paul.twomey@argopacific.com> wrote:

Greg, Niels, Tatiana and Matt

Well done on a good document.

Paul

On 11/3/15 12:36 PM, Greg Shatan wrote:

All:

Attached are Word and PDF versions of a proposed final draft of the deliverable of WP4, which is intended to become part of the next Report of the CCWG.

Niels and Tatiana and Matt went through the document after our call and edited and resolved the proposed changes in the document.  I followed with further edits and formatting work.  I believe that all of us sought to be neutral rapporteurs carrying out the sense of today's call and the work of our group.

I felt that we needed a section which specifically set out the process and results of our discussions on refining the language of the Bylaw, rather than leaving this to our recommendations in the final section of the document.  Therefore, I took the liberty of creating such a section, and hope that you will find that this section reflects our work.

This document also remains available on Google Drive.

I look forward to any comments.

Best regards,

Greg

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