Leon and all,

On point 3, I don't understand why we would be adding to or amending the Second Public Comment document.  This document has now been published as part of the CCWG's overall review of the public comments.  I think this document is pretty much closed.

On the other hand, we were working on a rationale document in a Google Doc before the public comment analysis and then Dublin took over our lives.  I think what we need to do is work on a document that uses as its starting point (i) the second draft report section on human rights, (ii) pieces of the rationale document, (iii) a fairly brief discussion/analysis of the comments and (iv) the new material provided by Leon.  The ultimate goal should be to turn this into the human rights section of the next draft of the report.  I've been working on such a document and should have a draft shortly.  I won't have it as far along as I'd hoped, due to a medical emergency in my family, but hopefully it will be far enough along to give a sense of where it could go.

Greg