As per the Diversity Rapporteurs request please find attached my suggested edits to the Diversity recommendations for consideration on our next call.
I have tried to be very faithful to the original intents in most cases and have added a few things that seemed to be required and consistent with the other recommendations.
The biggest overall change is that I found a number or the original recommendations overlapped which usually causes issues - as such I have cleaned this without hopefully changing any intents.
Bernard Turcotte
ICANN Staff Support to the CCWG-Accountability-WS2