Jorge,

Yes.  This is reflected in the Google Doc, and if you mouse over the changes in Word.

Greg

On Wed, Sep 27, 2017 at 1:39 AM, <Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch> wrote:
Dear Greg,

The changes in "red ink" are from you?

Thanks for clarifying.

regards

Jorge


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Von: Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com>
Datum: 27. September 2017 um 07:33:38 MESZ
An: ws2-jurisdiction <ws2-jurisdiction@icann.org>
Betreff: [Ws2-jurisdiction] Updated "Applicable Law and Choice of Venue Provisions" Recommendation

All,

Attached is an updated version of this recommendation in Word and PDF formats, found at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xAyla8FTaL7jZ0D2rYtAzQUr3gEnirTKiAG-kqD0ZSs/edit?usp=sharing (please make all changes in SUGGEST mode).

Please review and be prepared to discuss.

Thank you.

Greg