All,
Please find attached an updated summary and list of comments based on the 31 January meeting of the sub-group.
The changes from the previous version:
- Section 10 colour coding revised as requested
- Official translation of the French comment has replaced the rough translation in comment 4.03
- Discussions on the individual comments have been updated based on the raw transcript and are noted starting with 20180131
- The 31 January meeting completed the first reading of sections 8 to 11 and proposed some edits to recommendations for comments 1.01 to 5.03 inclusive.
- The 7 February meeting will begin with comment 5.04.
Bernard Turcotte
ICANN Staff support to the CCWG-Accountability-WS2