Dear Greg, Thanks for efforts While I am reviewing those element you included in the recommands part, I did suggest to also include other parts of the suggested paragraph in the introductory and preamble part as amendedby me last night making them softened ,taking account of Milton's and Paul? s comments If yes pls advise where ( in the introductory and / or preamble part of the documents) ) these other elements are included .$ Tks Kavouss On Thu, Sep 21, 2017 at 7:29 AM, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com> wrote:

All,

I have attached Word and PDF versions of the Google Doc as it now stands, showing suggestions added by Thiago, and suggestions based on list contributions from Kavouss and Paul Rosenzweig.

Please review these suggested changes and indicate your views by replying here and/or making suggestions in the Google Doc.

it is important that we have broad review of these suggestions. Thank you.

Best regards,

Greg

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