Dear All,
Pls find attached my comment in redlines
Regards
Arasteh

2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <mshears@cdt.org>:

Hi

In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake.

Matthew


On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote:
Dear all, 


Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest.

As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit


Best regards,

Cheryl, Farzi, Steve

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