Dear Farzaneh,

 

Thanks for it.

 

Please see the report in attachment. I made few style and typo edits.

 

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Giovanni

 

 

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From: ws2-so_ac-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ws2-so_ac-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of farzaneh badii
Sent: 24 October 2016 14:07
To: Kavouss Arasteh
Cc: ws2-so_ac@icann.org
Subject: Re: [Ws2-so_ac] WS 2 SO/AC Accountability progress report

 

Thank you, Mr. Arasteh and Matthew for the comments. 

 

I have made some changes to the document based on Matthew's comment and have accepted the useful changes Mr. Arasteh added to the document. I have tried to polish the document so had to make some minor changes and strike out one of the sentences that was changed. I hope that is ok. This document will be sent to the CCWG today.

 

Best 

 

Farzaneh 

 

On 21 October 2016 at 21:51, Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com> wrote:

Dear All,

Pls find attached my comment in redlines

Regards

Arasteh

 

2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <mshears@cdt.org>:

Hi

In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake.

Matthew

 

On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote:

Dear all, 

 

 

Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest.

 

As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit

 

 

Best regards,

 

Cheryl, Farzi, Steve

 

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