Thanks for the active reviewing that many of you have already done.  

In the attached docs/PDF, I incorporated Google doc edits and comments provided thus far, by:

Tom Dale (GAC)

Joan Kerr (NPOC)

Juan Manuel Rojas (NPOC)

Poncelelt Ileleji (NPOC)

Anonymous

I also added review elements from the questionnaire response completed by the Registries Stakeholder Group (RySG).   Our WG somehow did not receive the RySG response when it was circulated to staff on 19-Jan.   (the RySG response is now posted on our wiki)

Here are ways you can continue to suggest edits:

1. Reply all with an email offering comments. 

2. Mark-up the attached Word Doc Draft 1.1 (use track changes, please).

3. Suggest comments on the Google Doc Draft 1.1 (clean) at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xDVHUW6p5bS_Zedq61fBlH7UFZ4LH6lmp462iaVI2Pw/edit?usp=sharing 

From: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@netchoice.org>
Date: Monday, February 20, 2017 at 2:47 PM
To: "ws2-so_ac@icann.org" <ws2-so_ac@icann.org>
Cc: Brenda Brewer <mssi-secretariat@icann.org>, farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii@gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr@gmail.com>
Subject: Draft report for review before next call on 23-Feb

As promised on our last call, we consolidated all 3 tracks of our work into a single DRAFT report (PDF and MSWord attached). 

We added links to the home page and charter of the 3 groups who did not respond to our questionnaire (RrSG, RySG and NPOC) 

Please review and offer edits before our upcoming working group call on 23-Feb @ 05:00 UTC.

Here are some ways you can suggest edits before our call:

1. Reply all with an email offering comments. 

2. Mark-up the attached Word Doc (use track changes, please).

3. Suggest comments on the Google Doc version at https://docs.google.com/document/d/14y1GB9vGhsWXVXtdtZmAjCWwzKVfrLfwDQYksrkDD94/edit?usp=sharing 

On our call we can do first reading for our working group, and discuss edits and additions for our second reading a week later.   If we can make that schedule work, we can offer our report to the CCWG Plenary at our face-to-face meeting at Copenhagen on 10-March.

Best,

Steve, Cheryl, and Farzi

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