"... ... a revised report that reflects consensus on our 3-Aug subgroup call:Added a clarifying note about ASO on page 3, to say we are only addressing their ICANN activities.Revised the Transparency Good Practice for publishing meeting records, on pages 6-7, regarding open and closed meetings. With that in place, we can remove the meeting records practice under “Participation”Revised the "Annual Report" good practice on page 6.We may need a note to clarify what we mean by “members”, but I don’t think so.Attached are:A redline comparing to our 29-Mar plenary draft.The summary matrix of public comments (plus PDF), where Column E shows our response to the comment. ( I think we should use this matrix to guide our comment response work on upcoming calls.)Please review and comment before our next call, on 10-Aug-2017."